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假定英文课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用（）划掉。

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I'd like to talking about my most memorable experience. It was the trip to Australia I had three      

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years before with my dance group to participate in/ international dance festival. It was the first

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time I had travelled by plane in my life. My mum worried a lot, so everything went smoothly. I

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stayed there for two week and it was the happiest time in my life. Besides our performances there,

                Weeks

we    have much excitement. We spent on      almost every morning sunbathing on the beautiful beach

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and swam in the blue sea. But warmly Australian nights were which I adored most of all. It was a

swimming warm      what

time of joy，lights, music and summer parties.

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