假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文*有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。...

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文*有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。...

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。作文*有10处错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

    注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Mr. Hill was a chicken farmer whose had hundreds of chickens. He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money, so the house he lived in was hot and uncomfortable. He found his hen laid hardly any eggs in summer, and then he decided to put his air conditioner(空调) into his chicken house so that his hens could lay well all through year. The boss of the air conditioning company came to see her one day. When he saw Mr. Hill's house, he thought that he might be able to persuading him to Buy for an air conditioner. “Your wife would be more happier and more comfortable then.” he said to Mr. Hill. But Mr. Hill was not interesting. “My wife didn't lay eggs.” Mr. Hill said.

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Mr Hill was a chicken farmer whosewho had hundreds of chickens. He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money, sobut the house he lived in was hot and uncomfortable. He found his henhens laid hardly any eggs in summer, and then he decided to put his air conditioner into his chicken house so that his hens could lay well all through ∧the year. The boss of the air conditioning company came to see herhim one day. When he saw Mr Hill's house, he thought that he might be able to persuadingpersuade him to buy (for) an air conditioner. “Your wife would be more\more\   happier and more comfortable then,” he said to Mr Hill. But Mr Hill was not interestinginterested. “My wife didn'tdoesn't lay eggs,” Mr Hill said.

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