假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文*有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。...

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假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文，文*有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

    One morning, Jim was on the bus to school, occupied a “special seat”. Though an elderly man stood in the front of him, he pretended not to see him. He turned on his mobile phone to surf on the Internet, regardless the other passengers’ stares.

    However, something which happened later changed him. In the afternoon, he was played basketball when suddenly he was knocked down and hurt his ankle.

    Late that day, on another crowded bus, he had to stand under a crutch supporting him. Luckily, a girl seating before him looked up and noticed quick stood up to give up her seat to Jim. Suddenly, he began to regret his behavior in the morning, but thought he would never be selfish again.

【回答】

  One morning, Jim was on the bus to school, occupied a “special seat”. Though an elderly man 

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stood in the front of him, he pretended not to see him. He turned on his mobile phone to surf on

the Internet, regardless ∧the other passengers’ stares.

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  However, something which happened later changed him. In the afternoon, he was played

                    that                                              playing

basketball when suddenly he was knocked down and hurt his ankle.

Late that day, on another crowded bus, he had to stand under a crutch supporting him. Luckily,

  Later                                         with

a girl seating before him looked up and noticed him. She quick stood up to give up her seat to Jim.

    sittingseated                               quickly

Suddenly, he began to regret his behavior in the morning, but thought he would never be selfish

                                               and

again.

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题型：短文改错