假定英语课上来时要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误，每句中最多有...

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    假定英语课上来时要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文*有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加,刪除或修改。

   增加:在缺词处加一个漏字宇符号（∧),并在在其下面写出该加的词。

   删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。

   修改：在错词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

      My brother, who is Harvard graduate, works  in a multinational company,

The company bid failed several limes in it1 s attempts to break into to  Chinese

market in the past two years. As a  new  manager  on charge of the sales  departmen,

he is trying every possible  mean's to  promote  their  products. Because of

he' s taken some effective  measures, their profits are expecting to rise by 50%  .

I real take pride in my brother. What's more, he has promised to giving me live

thousand yuan unlit the summer   holidays  come. If so, I will be able to go on

varation. How a wonderful piece of news!

【回答】

后加a ,  2. Company 后had 改为has   ’s改为its  ger后的on改为in   use后of去掉   cting改为expected  改为really  ng改为give  l改为when或if或before  改为what

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错