1.Thosewhoeagerforsuccesswillmakeeveryefforttoachieveit...

问题详情：

1. Those who eager for success will make every effort to achieve it.

2. This particular sad event left a deep impression to Pliny who had lost an uncle in the eruption.

3. Trying to learn the word “love” was a experience that she remembered well.

4. Miss Sullivan put her arm gentle round me

5. She had a breakthrough while work on a simple task.

6. Mr Fan, the English teacher, the large but friendly man, seeing me and gave me a nasty surprise.

7. I read from my book instead reciting the poems.

8. The day started to go wrong the instant when I left home.

9. I had to wait for the school bus for ages.

10. One person, sitting alone, look like he is praying.

【回答】

1. who后加are  icular改成particularly  to改成on

改成Trying  a改成an   4. gentle改成gently 5. work改成working

ng改成saw  ead后加of  8.删掉when  9. age改成ages 10. Look改成looks

知识点：其他

题型：短文改错