下面的饼状图显示了某校对学生学业成绩评价的新体制，图表所示的五个方面构成了一个学生的血液成绩。假如你是该校学生...

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下面的饼状图显示了某校对学生学业成绩评价的新体制，图表所示的五个方面构成了一个学生的血液成绩。假如你是该校学生，请你以“The New Grading System in Our School”为题用英语写一篇短文，给《二十一世纪英文报》投稿。

【内容要点】

简要描述图中信息；

谈谈你对这一新举措的看法并说明原因。

【写作要求】

不要逐条翻译；

作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

词数150左右。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Yours

Li Jin

【回答】

The New Grading System in Our School

In order to help students develop their abilities in all fields, our school now has asked the teachers to make some changes in the grading system. This chart shows how it works.

Students’ test results, which used to be the only way to evaluate a student in school, make up only 30% of his final score. Instead, how a student performs in class, and how he takes notes and does his homework are also taken into account, each part of which makes up 20%. Besides, teamwork in class is also important. If you want a higher score, you should be good at working together with your classmates.

I’m all for the new grading system, which evaluates us students in all fields. By doing so, we students can fully develop our abilities as well as potential on our way to adulthood and can truly make preparations for our future life.

知识点：图画作文

题型：书面表达