阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Iwasdiagnosedwithcancer...

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   阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Iwasdiagnosedwithcancer...

    阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

I was diagnosed with cancer at 31. When I heard this news, my heart sank. When Sally heard about my diagnosis, she approached me and was supportive. I was surprised at her kindness because she was almost a stranger to me. I had expressed fears of having chemotherapy (化疗).  Just before my firs chemotherapy, she gave me a gift. She told me she’d give me one of these gifts just before every chemotherapy until I finished all the treatment. I explained I’d be having chemotherapy every other week for months because I didn’t want her to be obligated(有义务的).  She told me that she wanted me to say, “What is Sally going to turn up with this time?” instead of   “I’ve got another painful chemotherapy session.”

  Each time she came to see me, she brought a present. I was a bit embarrassed at first, but as treatment went on, I found myself looking forward to a beautifully wrapped gift, such as a candle, a book or a bar of chocolate, Carefully choosing gifts every time, she never missed one. It didn’t matter what the gift was. It made a difference that she cared enough to think of me every week, knowing I was going through a painful course that would in the end, save my life. Now when I look at these gifts, I am so grateful for Sally’s promise.

【写作内容】

1. 以约30个词总结上文:

2. 以约120个词就“信守承诺”这个话题发表自己的看法,并包括如下要点:

  (1)你读后的感想;

  (2)列举你或他人的事例并说明你的感想;

  (3)你对“信守承诺”的理解或建议。

【写作要求】

1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容,但不得直接引用原文中的句子;

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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【回答】

【参考范文】读写任务 (One possible version)

The author suffered from cancer, but Sally gave him a gift every time he had chemotherapy. With her timely and warm care, he smoothly went through the painful course.  

It is a touching story which has proved what “A promise is a promise” means. It is admirable that Sally made a promise and kept it from beginning to end. Take Li Xin, my deskmate for example. In Senior One, I did badly in math, and did not get along well with him. He promised to help me with my math every day after school. He never broke his promise and explained every minor mistake to me patiently. As time went by, I made great progress in math. Most importantly, we have become best friends ever since.

It seems to me that keeping promises plays an important role in smoothing social communication. Once we make a promise, in no way should we break it.

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