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  阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。Ifyouliketobreakthingswh...

   阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

If you like to break things when you are unhappy, the Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School is the school for you. This term, Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School will build a "stress wall" to help students who feel unhappy because of schoolwork or for other reasons.      Tao Dehua, a leader at the school said the idea of a stress wall started when footprints were found on some newly painted walls and some school windows were broken.      "These things happen because some students feel lots of pressure from their studies or because they don't get along well with other students. When under stress, the body get ready to either run or fight and becomes very nervous. Hitting the wall can help relax the body and take away stress," Tao said.      "Tests and homework make me Sad," said Lu Yan, a junior girl. “I can't wait to hit the wall. It will help me a lot with my problems."           Another girl student who wouldn't give her name said that the wall won't help. “Mainly because it can't talk," she said. "I need to talk to someone when I'm sad." 【写作内容】  1、以约30个词概括这段短文内容;  2、然后以约120个词就“Should the stress wall be built"这个主题发表你的看法,并      包括以下要点:      (1) 学生的压力来源;      (2) 是否该建此墙;      (3) 提供一些其他有效的减压方法。 【写作要求】   l、可以参照阅读材料但不得直接引用原文的句子;   2、作文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 【评分标准】   概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

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 In order to help students deal with stress(目的), the Nanjing Zhonghua Middle School will build a “stress wall” for students to relax(谁做了什么事). Some students think it helps while others say it is useless.(结果)

  Nowadays, students are under great pressure, which mainly comes from their peers, parents as well as school work.(段首中心句,回应(1)学生的压力来源). There is no doubt that as the competing for better academic work and future is getting fiercer and fiercer, students feel more and more pressure.

As far as I am concerned, building a stress wall, which the students can hit, is not appropriate(段首中心句,回应:(2)是否该建此墙). For one thing, as the saying goes, violence is not the solution to problems, which means that even if students punch the wall heavily, the true stress in the bottom of their hearts can not be let out. For another, this may lead students to solve a problem with violence, causing more trouble.           

People have different ways of relieving stress in order to live happy and healthy lives (段首中心句,回应:(3)提供一些其他有效的减压方法)。Some people prefer to engage in physical exercise by taking part in outdoor activities or playing sports, while some feel more relaxed listening to music or even after a good sleep. As for me, I find that the best way to reduce stress is to spend time with my family or friends. In addition, some interest clubs such as music, dance, are also good places that offer comfort to students.

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