假如你校最近就“家长应该如何对待孩子”的问题进行了调查,结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果,并针对...

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假如你校最近就“家长应该如何对待孩子”的问题进行了调查,结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果,并针对图表2中的一个数据所反映的情况表达你的看法。

假如你校最近就“家长应该如何对待孩子”的问题进行了调查,结果如下。请根据图表1中提供的信息描述调查结果,并针对...

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【写作指导】 这是一篇典型的图表类作文。要求准确地表述调查结果并表达自己的看法。在写作时应注意:(1)正确使用分数的表达法;(2)时态应以一般现在时为主;(3)分层次叙述,分为喜欢和不喜欢两个方面;(4)句式要复杂多样,可使用各类从句来表达。

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Recently our school has conducted a survey among the students about how parents should treat their children.

According to Chart 1, three kinds of behavior from parents are considered the most welcome by the students. 33.5% of the students feel happy that their parents trust them, laying a solid foundation for family communication. 31.7% are content to be in the equal position with their parents when they are talking with each other. What's more, 22.7% feel happy to receive constant praise or encouragement from their parents.

As is shown in Chart 2, 32% of the students think their parents expect too much of them, especially in their studies, putting great pressure on them. Although all parents love their children and give the best to them, they put too much pressure on their children. Some students think they will disappoint their parents if they are not admitted into a top school or university.

I think parents should have practical expectations of their children. This way, the children will feel more confident about themselves and really make a difference in the future.

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