文*有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧...

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文*有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧...

文*有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改. 增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉.

修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

       2.只允许修改10处,多者(从11处起)不计分.

As is well﹣known that birds are our friends.But the large number of birds have been killed for food.The other day I was walking in the woods while a shot was heard.Hearing the shot,the bird in the trees flew to all directions.A bird was badly injured and looked sadly.Finding the bird injured,so I decided to take it home.At home I take good care of it.When it recovered,I returned itself to the woods.I hope something should be done to prevent birds from killed.

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As is well﹣known that birds are our friends.But the large number of birds have been killed for food.The other day I was walking in the woods while a shot was heard.Hearing the shot,the bird in the trees flew to all directions.A bird was badly injured and looked sadly.Finding the bird injured,so I decided to take it home.At home I take good care of it.When it recovered,I returned itself to the woods.I hope something should be done to prevent birds from∧killed.

详解:

1.As改为It  考查代词.根据句式,此句是主语从句,需用it做形式主语.

 2.the改为a 考查冠词.此处为固定短语a large number of意为大量的,the  number of表示…的数量.

 3.while改为when 考查连接词,两个动作几乎同时发生时用when来引导时间状语从句,意为就在那时.

 4.bird改为birds 考查名词单复数.bird为可数名词,所以用复数形式,指这些鸟.

 5.to改为in  考查介词.朝各个方向用介词in.

6.sadly改为sad 考查形容词.此处look为系动词,需接形容词做表语.

7.去掉so  根据句式可知,此处是一个主从复合句,所以不需要连接词.

8.take改为took 考查时态.叙述过去一件事情,所以用一般过去时.

 9.itself改为it  考查代词.前文提到受伤的鸟,后面再次出现需用it来替代.

10.from killed 中间加being 此处考查固定短语prevent sb from doing 意为阻止某人做,要考虑被动结构,所以加being.

知识点:其他

题型:短文改错

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