增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:删除多余的词用斜线()划掉.修改:在错的词...

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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:删除多余的词用斜线()划掉.修改:在错的词...

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^),并在其下面写出该加的词.

删除:删除多余的词用斜线()划掉.

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.

注意:1.每处错误及其修改仅限一词;2.只允许修改10处,从11处起不计分

As is known,that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies.Many large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies.The idea has quickly spread to Europe which,in most countries,special courses were offered to children who are from 7to 24months old.The first step is to have child get rid of the fear about water.Next,he is teaching to float in water.Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear,the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.

【回答】

As is known,that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies.Many

large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies.The idea

        towns                                                             particular

has quickly spread to Europe which,in most countries,special courses were offered to children

                                           where                                                      are

who are from 7 to 24 months old.The first step is to have∧child get rid of the fear about water.

                                                                                       a                                     of

Next,he is teaching to float in water.Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear,the

                     taught                                                                                         without

child can master the technique and push him forward through water.

                                                         himself

解析:

1.去掉that.考查定语从句.根据句式分析As is known,that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies可知As is known是定语从句,所以后句是主句,不用that,所以去掉that.

2.town﹣﹣﹣towns.考查名词.根据town前面的修饰词Many可知town用复数.

3.particularly﹣﹣﹣particular.考查副词和形容词.根据句子中Many large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies.(佛罗里达和加利福尼亚的很多大的镇子已经为婴儿开办了专门的课程)可知particularly 修饰名词lessons,所以用形容词particular.

4.which﹣﹣﹣where.考查复合句.根据句式分析The idea has quickly spread to Europe(主句) which(Europe为先行词的定语从句),in most countries,special courses were offered to children who (children为先行词的定语从句)are from 7to 24months old.因为Europe在定语从句中做地点状语,表示"在欧洲的许多国家,给7到24个月的婴儿提供了特别的课程.",所以关系词用in which 或where.

5.were﹣﹣﹣are.考查动词的时态.根据上文可知讲述现在的情况,所以用一般现在时.

6.child前加a.考查冠词.根据后句Next,he is teaching to float in water可知可数名词child用单数,所以加a.

7.about﹣﹣﹣of.考查介词.根据The first step is to have child get rid of the fear about water.可知第一步是让孩子摆脱对于水的恐惧,表示"…的"应该用介词of.

8.teaching﹣﹣﹣taught.考查被动语态.根据上文可知he is teaching to float in water他被教导在水里浮着,teach和he之间是被动关系.

9.with﹣﹣﹣without.考查介词.联系上文可知can swim with fear表示"孩子能没有恐惧的游泳",所以用without,表示没有.

10.him﹣﹣﹣himself.考查反身代词.根据句子的主语the child 和宾语 him 可知动作的执行者和接受者是一个人,所以用反身代词.句义是一旦孩子对水没有了恐惧,孩子就能掌握这项技能,在水里推动自己向前.

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