假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李欢,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文日记,记录你班同学上周六参观*科...

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假设你是红星中学高三(1)班学生李欢,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文日记,记录你班同学上周六参观*科学院的全过程。

注意:词数不少于60.

提示词:*科学院 Chinese Academy of Sciences

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【回答】

One possible version:

Last Saturday, my classmates and I went to the Chinese Academy of Sciences, which was a precious chance/golden opportunity to get close to science.

The moment we arrived at the Chinese Academy of Sciences, we were warmly greeted by a friendly expert standing at the entrance. Excited and happy, we clapped our hands and everyone was eager to explore the amazing scientific world. To have a better understanding of daily basic science, we attended a professional lecture themed Life and Water. A professor introduced the topic in such great detail that we all gave full attention and took a lot of notes.

The highlight of the visit was the hands-on experience in the science lab. Under the guidance of the expert, we got involved in a medical experiment with great care and enthusiasm. Observing the samples through the microscope, we, for the first time, got to know how anti-cancer drugs were developed and what awesome achievements our hardworking scientists had made. We also felt proud of the medical progress of our country.

Before we left, we invited the expert to take a group photo with us as a reminder of the fantastic visit, everyone wearing a big smile. Through the meaningful activity, we all agree that science plays an important role in our life and we will study hard to take advantage of it to make our world a better place.

解析：写好这类作文要注意几个步骤:

1. 认真审题,找准提示语中的关键词或句,确定中心思想.

2. 依据关键句,草拟提纲,梳理文章的脉络

3. 准确定位人称、时态.注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.

4.最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等

高分句型一:Last Saturday, my classmates and I went to the Chinese Academy of Sciences, which was a precious chance/golden opportunity to get close to science.

本句是which引导的非限定*定语从句;

意为: 上周六,我和我的同学去了*科学院,这是一个接近科学的宝贵机会/黄金机会.

高分句型二:A professor introduced the topic in such great detail that we all gave full attention and took a lot of notes.

本句是that引导的定语从句;

意为: 一位教授如此详细地介绍了这个话题,以至于我们都给予了充分的关注,并做了很多笔记.

知识点：图画作文

题型：书面表达