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Would you like to Be a regular visitor to the Business walking street while staying here? Please make a reservation at this hotel. It is only S minutes' walking distance from the city centre.

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Would you like to Be a regular visitor to the Business walking street while staying here?Please make a reservation at this hotel. It is only S minutes' walking distance from the city centre.