对标有题号的每一行作出判断：短文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。此行多一...

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对标有题号的每一行作出判断：短文中有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行下边写出该加的词。

此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行下边写出改正后的词。

注意：1.每处错误仅限1词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Editor, I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of

the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, But she words very hard.

We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk evening she told me

that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks

one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out

of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .

She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire.

Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.

I have a good friend who’s name is Liu Mei. She is our monitor and one of

the excellent students in our class. Clever as she is, but she words very hard.

We have a lot on common and have a lot to talk evening she told me

that something happened when her parents was out. She was doing her homeworks

one Sunday morning when she smelt something burning. She stopped look out

of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house .

She called 119 immediate. Ten minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire.

Her neighbor was very thankful for her help.

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after school. She holds view that senior three students have to make fully use of every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am allowed to do that, I’ll unable to control myself and forget all about my study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas. In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works. Besides, it is important for us to know what had happened at home and at abroad. Thus, we shouldn’t be forbidden to watch TV.

【回答】

I often quarrel about my mother over whether I can watch TV after

with

school. She holds∧ view that senior three students have to make fully use of

the full

every minute to work hard at their lessons. It seems to me that once I am

her

allowed to do that, I’ll∧ unable to control myself and forget all about my

study. She also thinks it is bad for my eye. But I really can’t accept her ideas.

eyes

In my opinion, watch TV can set my mind at rest after a day’s hard works.

watching work