SundayMail青少年专栏开展“对身边的人说一句话”主题征文活动，这句话或许是对父母的一句“我爱你”，或许...

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Sunday Mail 青少年专栏开展“对身边的人说一句话”主题征文活动，这句话或许是对父 母的一句“我爱你”，或许是对老师、同学的一句 “谢谢你”，或许是对身边人的一句“对不起”等。请将“I want to say_______”补充完整，并以此为题写一篇英语短文，如：I want to say thank you 等。谈谈你想说那句话的原因以及发生在那句话背后的故事，并说说你的感受。

要求：

1. 认真审题，把握要点；

2. 行文连贯，条理清晰，不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息；

3. 100 词左右。

【回答】

I want to say thank you

I want to say thank you to my dear mother. She not only cares about my life, but always helps me out.

Once I argued with my best friend Lucy, because she always pointed out my shortcomings. My mother talked with me and advised me to think about her words. I did so and found what Lucy said was helpful to me. With my mother’s help, I didn’t lose my best friend and learned how to deal with problems with friends.

She does all that she can do for me. No matter what will happen in the future, I will love her forever.

【解析】本文属于话题作文，对身边的人说一句话，并谈谈你想说那句话的原因以及发生在那句话背后的故事，并说说你的感受。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如not , care about, help sb out, argue with, point out, talk with, advise sb to do, think about, be helpful to, with one’s help, deal with以及in the future等，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。

知识点：其他

题型：书面表达