阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。 "I'mgoingtomissyousomu...
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阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
"I'm going to miss you so much, Poppy," said the tall, thin teenager. He bent down to hug his old friend goodbye. He stood up, hugged his parents, and smiled, trying not to let his emotions(情绪) get the better of him.
His parents were not quite able to keep theirs under control. They had driven their son several hours out of town to the university where he would soon be living and studying. It was time to say goodbye for now at least. The family hugged and smiled through misty eyes and then laughed.
The boy lifted the last bag onto his shoulder, and flashed a bright smile. "I guess this is it," he said. "I'll see you back home in a month, okay?" His parents nodded, and they watched as he walked out of sight into the crowds of hundreds of students and parents. The boy's mother turned to the dog, "Okay, Poppy, time to go back home."
The house seemed quiet as a tomb without the boy living there. All that week, Poppy didn't seem interested in her dinner, her favorite toy, or even in her daily walk. Her owners were sad too, but they knew their son would be back to visit. Poppy didn't.
They offered the dog some of her favorite peanut butter treats. They even let her sit on the sofa, but the old girl just wasn't her usual cheerful self. Her owners started to get worried. "What should we do to cheer Poppy up?" asked Dad. "We've tried everything."
"I have an idea, but it might be a little crazy," smiled Mom. "Without anybody left in the house but us, this place could use a bit of fun. Let's get a little dog for Poppy."
It didn't take long before they walked through the front door carrying a big box. Poppy welcomed them home as usual but when she saw the box, she stopped. She put her nose on it. Her tail began wagging(摆动)ever so slowly, then faster as she caught the smell.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右;
2. 至少使用5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段, 每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后, 请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Para 1. Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared.
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Para 2. A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university.
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【回答】
Paragraph 1:
Dad opened the box and a sweet little dog appeared. Poppy jumped with joy at the sight of the little dog. She lowered her head to watch it curiously. Then she became so excited that she accidentally knocked over the box in an attempt to get closer. With the box tipping over, out came the little one, who was not shy and instantly got familiar with Poppy. It didn't take long before the two played around the house, cheerfully running after each other.
Paragraph 2:
A few weeks later, the boy arrived home from university. He had been missing his parents and the dog since it was the first time that he had been away from home for such a long time. When the boy caught sight of Poppy, he went rushing toward the dog and bent down to give her a big hug. Suddenly, the boy noticed the little dog. "Oh my, who is this?" His parents laughed at the look of surprise on his face. "It's Poppy's new companion," said Mom.
解析：
【写作指导】做本篇读后续写时应注意以下几点。（1）明确故事的人物关系。故事中主要人物是男孩和宠物*Poppy。（2）理清故事的主要事件。男孩要离家去上学，没有了小主人的陪伴，Poppy变得很孤单。（3）根据已知人物、事件及续写段落首句预测故事的发展。续写的第一段首句讲的是盒子里有一只小*，可知他们又买了一只小*，接着可以描写Poppy面对小*的反应。续写第二段首句说男孩从学校回家了，可以进一步写男孩和两只*之间发生的事。（4）材料中给了10个关键词语，写作时需要按照这些关键词语来组织故事发展的主要线索。
知识点：提纲作文
题型：书面表达
