共享单车在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战...

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共享单车在苏州投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的＂照妖镜＂，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。

社会现状	自从出现，饱受赞誉。
诸多优势	1. 有益健康，减少污染 2. 费用不高，负担得起 3. （自拟一条）
存在问题	1. 未及时归还 2. （自拟一条）
你的观点	我认为*要鼓励人们正确使用共享单车。

要求：

1.词数90左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

2.短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥。

3.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整。

Bike-sharing

Shared-bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. ___________________________________

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Bike-sharing

Shared-bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.

It has many advantages. First of all, using shared-bikes is not only good for health, But also less pollution. Secondly, it is not expensive and people can afford it. In a word, it brings a lot of convenience to people, which is pursued by people and changes the way people travel.

But shared-bikes also have some challenges. Some people can’t return it in time. Some do not cherish it, causing serious damage to the shared-bike.

I think the government should encourage people to use shared-bikes properly.

【写作亮点】

1.题干解读：本题要求写对共享单车的看法，属于议论文写作。作者开篇就明确共享单车的优势和好处；然后笔锋一转介绍使用中存在的问题；最后表明观点，提出使用建议。

2.例文点评：这篇习作是＂分总式＂结构。本文时态是一般现在时，主要以第三和第一人称展开论述，观点明确，内容充实，结构完整，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。

3.高分亮点：

短语：more and more popular, in daily life, first of all, be good for, not only…but also, in a word, a lot of, in time, encourage sb. do sth.

句型：First of all, using shared-bikes is not only good for health, but also less pollution.（非谓语动词结构）

It is not expensive and people can afford it.（并列结构）

In a word, it brings a lot of convenience to people, which is pursued by people and changes the way people travel.（定语从句）

I think the government should encourage people to use Shared-bikes properly.（宾语从句）

知识点：其他