改错:Onemonthbefore,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationarou...

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改错:One month before, with the College Entrance Examination around the corner, I was nervous and in low spirit because of my poor performance. When I was at the loss and on the point of giving up, my head teacher comforted me and discuss with me the reasons for my failure in the exam. More unforgettable, he managed to help me with my study and inspired us. Determined to live up the expectations of my teachers and my parents, I devoted myself to solve all the problems in my study and then made progress. I'm more than grateful for that he has done for me. I've got to know it is never too much late to get back when there is still hope.

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改错:Onemonthbefore,withtheCollegeEntranceExaminationarou...

【解析】re→ago 考查副词。根据语境可知,在考试前的一个月,由于高考临近,作者紧张、焦虑。表示从事情发生到现在时间过去了一个月,应用ago,而不能用before。

it→spirits 考查名词。in low spirits “情绪低落”,为固定短语。

→a 考查固定搭配。at a loss “不知所措”,不用the。

uss→discussed 考查动词的时态。此句中and连接两个并列谓语,即comforted和discussed,所以discuss用过去时。

rgettable→unforgettably 考查副词。此处修饰整个句子,而unforgettable “令人难忘的”是形容词,所以要改为副词unforgettably。

→me 考查代词。由上下文语境知此处要表达他帮助“我”,鼓励“我”,而不是“我们”,故将us改为me。

后加to 考查固定短语。根据语境可知,是为了不辜负老师们的期望,live up to the expectations of sb.为固定短语,意为“不辜负某人的期望”。

e→solving 考查非谓语动词。devote ... to “致力于,专心于”,to为介词,后面要接动名词或名词。

→what或that前加all 考查宾语从句。根据语境可知,“我”感激他为“我”做的一切。for为介词,后为宾语从句,从句缺宾语,所以用what或that前加all。

10.删除much 考查副词。never too late to get back意为“(只要有希望,)再晚回头也不晚”。故删除much。

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