根据所给的提示以“Jenny的周末”为题,写一篇短文。1.上星期六早上在家做作业、练习说英语。下午看电视、打网...

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根据所给的提示以“Jenny的周末”为题,写一篇短文。1.上星期六早上在家做作业、练习说英语。下午看电视、打网...

根据所给的提示以“Jenny的周末”为题,写一篇短文。

1. 上星期六早上在家做作业、练习说英语。 下午看电视、打网球。 晚上看电影。

2. 星期天的早上打扫房间,然后去海滩。下午购物、访友。晚上参加晚会。

3. 他的周末繁忙但有趣。

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【回答】

Jenny had a busy weekend. Last Saturday morning, she did her homework and practiced speaking English at home. She watched TV and played tennis on Saturday afternoon. That night, she went to the movies. On Sunday morning, she cleaned her room and went to the beach. On Sunday afternoon, she visited her friends and went shopping had a party last night.

What a busy but happy weekend she had!

【详解】

题干解读:本篇书面表达以“Jenny的周末”为话题,结合所给的写作材料,写出Jerry周末的各种活动。根据内容提示可知本文会使用到一般过去时态,注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用,使文意连接紧密,还要注意使用丰富的语句,注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,最后最好要表达出人物的感想和看法。

写作指导:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。文中practiced speaking English,on Saturday afternoon, went to the beach, went shopping, had a party等词组的恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密;文中还多处使用了并列连词和感叹句,大大增加了信息的容量,时态运用精准,使文章增*不少,值得学习。

【点睛】

知识点:日常活动

题型:作文

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