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Last summer I learnt to ride a bicycle. At first, I was able to control its direction. Sometimes I fall to the right or to the left. I was worrying, asking my father impatiently why he couldn’t ride straight. So he didn’t answer me directly. Instead of, he took me to side of the street. "Can you find bike tracks that is really straight?" asked my father. I watched careful and shook my head. "No," he said. "In fact, none of the tracks is always straight. But just by correct the direction every now and then, you have already gone forward."

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Last summer I learnt to ride a bicycle. At first, I was  to control its direction. Sometimes I  to the right or to the left. I was  , asking my father impatiently why  couldn’t ride straight.  he didn’t answer me directly. Instead of, he took me to side of the street. "Can you find bike tracks that really straight?" asked my father. I watched  and shook my head. "No," he said. "In fact, none of the tracks is always straight. But just by the direction every now and then, you have already gone forward."

第一处:able→unable。根据语境可知,此处指的应是起初,作者不能控制方向。故应用unable。

第二处:fall→fell。根据文章首句中的"Last summer"可知,此处描述的是发生在过去的事情,应用一般过去时。

第三处:worrying→worried。句子的主语是I,此处指的应是"感到担心的",应用worried。worrying"令人担心的",常用来修饰物。

第四处:he→I。根据语境可知,此处指作者问父亲自己为什么不能骑得比较直。故将he改为I。

第五处:So→But。前后句之间是转折关系,而不是因果关系,故用But。

第六处:去掉Instead后的of。根据语境可知,此处应用副词instead表示父亲反而把作者带到了街道的一边。instead of"代替,而不是……"为介词短语,后面要接名词、代词或动名词。

第七处:在side前加the。此处特指街道的一边,且side是可数名词,故应加上定冠词the。

第八处:is→are。that引导的是定语从句,并在从句中作主语,指代的是"bike tracks",表示复数概念,故从句谓语应用are。

第九处:careful→carefully。修饰动词应用副词。

第十处:correct→correcting。此处作介词by的宾语,故应用动名词形式。

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题型:短文改错

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