假如你是光明中学高二学生李华,你校学生会文学部（LiteratureDepartment）打算招聘一名英文编辑...

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假如你是光明中学高二学生李华, 你校学生会文学部（Literature Department）打算招聘一名英文编辑, 请你根据以下要点用英语给文学部负责人Lucy Wu写一封词数100左右的自荐信。

要点：1.写信目的；

2.个人基本信息；

3.自荐理由（至少三点）。

Dear Lucy,

___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Lucy,

I am writing this letter to apply for the position of English editor in your Literature Department.

My name is Li Hua, a student of Senior Grade Two, Guangming Middle School.

I recommend myself as a qualified English editor for the following reasons. Firstly, interested in literature, I have read a couple of novels, poetry and other literature works and have a good knowledge of literature.

Besides, English writing is my strong point. I have participated in many English writing competitions and won several prizes. Most importantly, as a cooperative, careful and devoted student, I am confident that I am able to do the job well. I am anxious for the position. Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

【分析】

这是一篇应用文，要求写一封自荐信。

【详解】

第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1.写信目的；2.个人基本信息；3.自荐理由（至少三点）。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主，兼用现在完成时。

第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，写信目的。第二段，个人基本信息。第三段，自荐理由（至少三点）。

第三步：确定关键词汇和短语:，recommend，qualified，participate，anxious，literature，novels, poetry ，cooperative, careful and devoted ，English writing，literature works，a couple of，apply for，have a good knowledge of ，be able to do sth ,look forward to ，English editor。

第四步：确定较为高级的句子:形容词短语interested in literature作状语Firstly, interested in literature, I have read a couple of novels, poetry and other literature works and have a good knowledge of literature. that 引导的宾语从句Most importantly, as a cooperative, careful and devoted student, I am confident that I am able to do the job well。

第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:firstly，besides，most importantly。

第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。

【点睛】

文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式：形容词短语interested in literature作状语Firstly, interested in literature, I have read a couple of novels, poetry and other literature works and have a good knowledge of literature. that 引导的宾语从句Most importantly, as a cooperative, careful and devoted student, I am confident that I am able to do the job well。

高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。

知识点：个人情况

题型：作文