Yearsago,Ireceivedgiftfrommyfriendonmybirthdaywhowasnow...

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Years ago, I received gift from my friend on my birthday who was now living far away. It delighted me on the sight of it. It was an artwork of paper cutting, a Chinese traditional art. With the gift, he also sent a letter, in that he informed me of that he had made the paper cutting himself. It took him several week to learn to make it. That’s why he value it more than any other gifts I received that day. Frank speaking, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look at it, I can’t help think of my friend. However far away we are, we feel closely to each other.

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Years ago, I received gift from my friend on my birthday who now living  far away. It delighted me the sight of it. It was an artwork of paper cutting, a   Chinese traditional art. With the gift, he also sent a letter, in he  informed me  of  that he had made the paper cutting himself. It took him several  to learn to make it. That’s why  value it more than any other gifts I received that  day. speaking, it is still hanging on the wall of my bedroom. Whenever I look  at it, I can’t help of my friend. However far away we are, we feel  to each  other.

第一处:gift前加a。gift是可数名词,且此处泛指"一个礼物",故需加上不定冠词a。

第二处:was →is。由时间状语"now"可知此处应用现在进行时。

第三处:on →at。at the sight of sth."看到,看见",为固定搭配。

第四处:that →which。分析句子结构可知,此处为"介词+关系代词"引导的定语从句,先行词是a letter, 故用which。

第五处:去掉that前的of。inform sb. 后可直接接that引导的从句。inform sb. of 后应接名词、代词或者动名词。故of多余。

第六处:week →weeks。由句中的"several"可知应用名词的复数形式。

第七处:he →I。本文是以第一人称来行文的,且由语境可知此处指那是我最为珍惜这一礼物的原因。故将he改为I。

第八处:Frank →Frankly。frankly speaking是习惯用法,意为"坦率地说"。

第九处:think →thinking。can’t help doing sth.意为"禁不住做某事";can’t help do意为"不能帮助做某事"。根据语境,此处应用thinking。

第十处:closely →close。系动词后应用形容词作表语,故用close。

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题型：短文改错