书面表达假如你是李华,上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容,写一篇短文。活动上午讲故事,唱...
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假如你是李华,上周日你独自在家照看你五岁的妹妹Nana,请根据表格内容,写一篇短文。
活动 | 上午 | 讲故事,唱歌,…… |
中午 | 煮面(cook noodles),休息(have a rest),…… | |
下午 | 玩游戏,看动画片(watch cartoons)…… | |
感受 | …… |
要求:1.参考表格内容,可适当发挥;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3.文章不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4.词数:不少于70词。(开头已给出但不计入总词数。)
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
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【回答】
Last Sunday, my parents were not at home, so I looked after my 5-year-old sister Nana at home.
In the morning, I told her many funny stories first. Then we sang and danced happily together. I also taught her to speak a few simple English words and she learned well. At noon, I cooked noodles with tomatoes and eggs. She said they were delicious. I was very glad that she enjoyed the lunch. Then we had a rest. In the afternoon, we played games together. After that, we watched cartoons until my parents came back. I felt tired but happy.
【解析】
写作分析:这篇作文是要求写一份日常活动的描述。描述一天的行为活动。首先要注意的就是时态,写作背景基于上周日,所以全文要使用一般过去时,其次要注意各个短语的正确表达方式,最后不能忘记适当表达自己的感受。
写作亮点:善于分段,可以用首段进行概括*描述,阐明背景(my parents were not at home)。第二段可以进一步开始细节描述。涉及到的短语有told her many funny stories,sang and danced happily,taught her to speak a few simple English words,cooked noodles,had a rest等等,使用短语的时候也有亮点,能够通过副词happily或者介词短语with tomatoes and eggs让动词短语的含义更加丰富。文章最后收尾简洁,用一句话点出了自己的感受,使得文章结构完整。
知识点:日常活动
题型:作文