假如你是李华，橙子辅导准备组织你校学生出国参加英语夏令营（EnglishSummerCamp），请写一封申请信...

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假如你是李华，橙子辅导准备组织你校学生出国参加英语夏令营（English Summer Camp），请写一封申请信给该培训中心。信的内容必须包括：

1. 申请报名。

2. 为什么想参加这个活动。

3. 对这项活动有怎样的打算和期待。

注意：1.词数100左右。

2. 信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Sir/Madam,

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Yours truly,

Li Hua

【回答】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am very glad that the English Summer Camp will be held to help us improve English and learn more about English culture. I am writing to apply for the English Summer Camp.

There are some reasons for my taking part in this activity. For one thing, having a lot of knowledge about the UK by reading books, I am crazy about the country’s culture as well as scenery. For another, I personally prefer British English, so while traveling there, I will have a chance to communicate with local people.

As is known to all, English is playing an important role in international society. I expect to have a better understanding of English culture by visiting places of interest. I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【分析】

本篇书面表达是一封书信。假如你是李华，橙子辅导准备组织你校学生出国参加英语夏令营（English Summer Camp），请写一封申请信给该培训中心。

【详解】

这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，不能遗漏要点：1. 申请报名；2. 为什么想参加这个活动；3. 对这项活动有怎样的打算和期待。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

根据写作要点我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和短语有：English Summer Camp，help us improve English，learn more about English culture，be writing to，apply for，take part in this activity，have a lot of knowledge about the UK by reading books，be crazy about the country’s culture，prefer British English，have a chance to communicate with local people，As is known to all，play an important role in international society，have a better understanding of English culture，visit places of interest，take …into consideration。可以使用的衔接词：1.表文章结构顺序：First of all，Firstly/First，Secondly/Second… And then，Finally，In the end，At last，Above all。2.表并列补充关系：What is more，Besides，Moreover，Furthermore，In addition，as well as，not only…but (also)。通过词汇铺垫，我们就很容易地行文了，文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。

【点睛】

范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了主从复合句：I am very glad that the English Summer Camp will be held to help us improve English and learn more about English culture. 这句话运用了that引导的宾语从句；As is known to all, English is playing an important role in international society. 这句话运用了as引导的非限制*定语从句；I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.这句话运用了if 引导的宾语从句，it是形式宾语。使用了一些固定词组，如：be writing to，apply for，take part in，be crazy about，play an important role in，have a better understanding of，places of interest，take …into consideration。全文中没有*式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增*添*。

知识点：其他

题型：作文